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When I think, I've thought
And when I listen, I've herd
However when I see
Or have seen
For some reason, I can't
My image is obscured
My world seems unclear
I hunger for a transparent life
A taste of simplicity
To eliminate all that is abstract
And make it tangible
But as life takes its course
Uncontrolled and ungoverned
I bare both its odor and fragrance
And wade through the elusive waters
Continuing my journey
I always remember to
Think about what I've herd
And listen to what I've thought
I called this "A Sense of Life" because the poem is obviously about the trials and tribulations we face from day to day. HOWEVER if you studied and looked at closely you may see i have used all of the five senses starting with...
Hearing: "And when i listen, I've herd."
Sight: Carries out through most of the poem "However when i see or have seen."
Touch: "And make it tangible."
Taste: "I hunger for a transparent life
A taste of simplicity."
Smell: "I bare both its odor and fragrance."
all talking about life it wraps together.
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chibi-ramen Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2010
uwkhfslizduyf...

and uhm...asfdshysrgf

<3
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jayjaytanner Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2010
Is that a good thing or not? Do you like it?
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chibi-ramen Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2010
lovett
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jayjaytanner Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2010
Why thank you lovely. <3
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